[DENIED] Marvin Andrew

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[DENIED] Marvin Andrew

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    Title (Mr/Miss/Mrs): Mr
    First Name: Marvin
    Last Name: Andrew
      Date of Birth: 05/15/1989
      Place of Birth: Los Santos
        Contact Number: 200-5447
        Residential Address: N/A
          Height: 182 cm
          Weight: 68 kg
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              Please provide a short biography about yourself (minimum 100 words):
              I was born in a little house near grove street my mom was a single parent trying to do her best but she couldn't make ends meet this lead to experiencing a lot of crime. my older brother was in a big gang which my mom hated but she couldn't do that much. since my brother would tell her off how it's not her business, I would always ask him stories about gang life. which he did but I never understood being in a gang. so when I was 17 I moved to the streets for a better life. I did some jobs trying to make money to live. After my brother died in a shoot out I was heartbroken so I wanted to do better in life and make a name for my self.
                How much time and energy do you plan on dedicating towards the department in the event you are hired?
                This is going to be my main job. so Im going to be spending most of my time working here.
                  Why do you want to join the San Andreas Department of Corrections, and why should we hire you over other applicants? (minimum 125 words)
                  I'm sure all applicants are great but I believe you should hire me over anyone else because I have the will power to do just about anything and the dedication to see it through to the end. I am more than capable of completing all duties thrown at me and I want to get things done, I'm not in this for the money or for the badge I'm in this because Its my passion and I don't want to see myself do anything else. Since I have came into the city people have shown me around and I have gotten to know the place and I always see the same things... Whether it be a group of guys in masks of Asian origin or guys wearing a distinctive blue, I want to see men like this serve there time and pay for their actions.
                    How do you handle pressure or stressful situations?
                    I would handle situations like this by remaining calm and reflecting on my training to get me through, everything can be solved with a level head and good decision making.
                        What qualifications or traits do you possess that may be an asset to us (minimum 75 words)? I think that my teamwork skills and devotion to my job will be a great asset while I work here and I also have some great social skills which can help me deescalate and resolve any high tension situations before they get out of control which will be useful given the environment and requirements of the job, I am also very responsive and can adapt quickly and a situation changes to suit the circumstances whether its calming down an agitated prisoner or breaking up a fight.
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                            Do you have any previous military or law enforcement history? If so, elaborate:
                            no
                              Have you ever worked for a government agency? If so, which one and what was your position?
                              no
                                Do you have any previous experience working as part of a team?
                                I worked at a club one night and we worked as a team very well.
                                  Have you ever been convicted of a crime? If so, explain:
                                  no
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                                    At least 2 past employment is required
                                      Name of employer: toll booth
                                      Period of employment: 07/ 05/2020 - 08/01/2020
                                      Position: operator
                                      Duties: opening the booth
                                      Reason for leaving: i left because i want to work at doc
                                        Name of employer: postal
                                        Period of employment: 1/03/2020 - 06/05/2020
                                        Position: mail man
                                        Duties: delivering mail
                                        Reason for leaving: left to work at tollbooth
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                                            Do you possess a valid driver’s license?
                                            [x ] Yes
                                            [ ] No
                                              Do you possess a valid firearms license?
                                              [ ] Yes
                                              [ ] Pending
                                              [ x] No
                                                Are you BLS certified?
                                                [ ] Yes
                                                [x ] No
                                                  Are you capable of understanding written information clearly and acting in accordance with it?
                                                  [x ] Yes
                                                  [ ] No
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                                                      I, Marvin Andrew the undersigned, hereby declare: That the information contained within this application form, the curriculum vitae and in the enclosed documents to my knowledge is true, and I undertake to provide documentary evidence, if required. I furthermore declare that all copies enclosed are true to the original documents. I declare that I am aware that any lack of veracity of the information or the distortion of the documents will entail the invalidity of the merits affected, and that I may be liable for legal responsibility.
                                                        I declare that the foregoing is true and correct.
                                                        MARVIN ANDREW
                                                        Signing date 04/08/2020
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                                                            Forum name: david12
                                                            Discord ID: davidlavoies #7344
                                                            IRL age: 17
                                                            Timezone: edt
                                                            Geographical location: montreal canada
                                                            List of characters’ names: moeez andrew joy andrew
                                                                Have you had any admin punishments on any character? If so, explain:
                                                                Yes i broke a lot of rules but i realized i love this server so i stopped
                                                                  Are you currently banned from any faction in the Eclipse Community?
                                                                  no
                                                                    Have you ever been or are you currently in another official faction? If so, name the faction(s) and your rank
                                                                    no
                                                                        Can you speak, understand and write English fluently?
                                                                        yes
                                                                          Do you have any IRL experience that might be relevant?
                                                                          not really
                                                                            Do you have Team Speak 3 and Discord installed?
                                                                            i have discord i can get team speak
                                                                              Are you capable of using a microphone to speak?
                                                                              yes
                                                                                  Please explain the use of /me and provide an example:
                                                                                  A /me is used to describe a characters actions such as /me slams his hand on the table.
                                                                                    Please explain the use of /do and provide an example of a scenario in which you might use it:
                                                                                    A /do can be used to respond to role play or describe what you would see such as /do you would see the outline of a dagger in Ronnie's trouser pocket.
                                                                                        Please provide a picture of your /stats:
                                                                                        https://i.imgur.com/ioJKPpV.png
                                                                                          Please provide a picture of your /license:
                                                                                          https://i.imgur.com/f9BB5tK.png
                                                                                            Please provide an unedited picture of your admin logs which are up to date (only the character list and admin logs!) :
                                                                                            https://i.imgur.com/MN00swm.png

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                                                                                              Last edited by moeez andrew on 07 Aug 2020, 19:59, edited 2 times in total.
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                                                                                              Re: [ON HOLD] Marvin Andrew

                                                                                              Post by Nathaniel Grey »

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                                                                                                  Dear Applicant,

                                                                                                  After reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we have made the executive decision to place your application On Hold due to the following reasons:
                                                                                                    • Your answer to "Please provide a short biography about yourself" is under word count.
                                                                                                    • Your application is hard interpret, please correct your grammatical errors.
                                                                                                      Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).

                                                                                                      Sincerely,
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                                                                                                      Nathaniel Grey
                                                                                                      Senior Correctional Officer I, Human Resources
                                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections


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                                                                                                      Ren Sanchez
                                                                                                      Warden of Bolingbroke Penitentiary
                                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections
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                                                                                                        Nathaniel Grey
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                                                                                                        Re: [ON HOLD] Marvin Andrew fixed

                                                                                                        Post by Nathaniel Grey »

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                                                                                                            Dear Applicant,

                                                                                                            After reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we have made the executive decision to place your application On Hold due to the following reasons:
                                                                                                              • Your application is hard interpret, please correct your grammatical errors.
                                                                                                              • I think I see a drawing of a stick figure on your application, could you please erase that? ((Your screenshots for admin logs are links to a message in a discord channel, which in turn makes us unable to open them. Please re-post your screenshots))
                                                                                                              • I do see a drawing of a moose, please remove that ((You do not have the required XP in the picture provided, you may use your other characters XP if it has enough (Minimum is 5k in total across all characters)))
                                                                                                              • Please also remove the hart above your name you drew ((Your license and stats screenshot are the same image please rectify this))
                                                                                                                Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).

                                                                                                                Sincerely,
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                                                                                                                Nathaniel Grey
                                                                                                                Senior Correctional Officer I, Human Resources
                                                                                                                San Andreas Department of Corrections


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                                                                                                                Ren Sanchez
                                                                                                                Warden of Bolingbroke Penitentiary
                                                                                                                San Andreas Department of Corrections
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                                                                                                                  moeez andrew
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                                                                                                                  Re: [ON HOLD] Marvin Andrew

                                                                                                                  Post by moeez andrew »

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                                                                                                                  Nathaniel Grey
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                                                                                                                  Re: [DENIED] Marvin Andrew

                                                                                                                  Post by Nathaniel Grey »

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                                                                                                                      Dear Applicant,
                                                                                                                        Upon reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we regret to inform you that we have no choice but to deny your application to join the SADOC. Your application has therefore been archived. Due to the following reasons we were unable to accept you today:
                                                                                                                          • Failure to address outlined issues.
                                                                                                                            In relation to any queries, questions or concerns, please email one of our officers with the Human Resources division using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )). You can reapply in one weeks time provided the reasons for denial are able to be rectified.

                                                                                                                            Sincerely,
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                                                                                                                            Nathaniel Nakamura
                                                                                                                            Corporal, Human Resources
                                                                                                                            San Andreas Department of Corrections


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                                                                                                                            Ren Sanchez
                                                                                                                            Warden of Bolingbroke Penitentiary
                                                                                                                            San Andreas Department of Corrections
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