[Denied] Ex-Felon SADOC Application - Peter Hannigan

[Peter Hannigan]

1. Personal Information

1.1 Title (Mr/Miss/Mrs): Mr
1.2 First Name: Peter
1.3 Last Name: Hannigan

1.4 Date of Birth: 16/DEC/2000
1.5 Place of Birth: Munich

1.6 Contact Number: 515-1147
1.7 Residential Address: N/A

1.8 Proof of identification and firearm license ((/license))
Attached digital copy

2. Traits & Motivations

2.1 Please provide a short biography about yourself (minimum 100 words):
I arrived in Los Santos four years ago starting with small freelance jobs like tollbooth work farming and oil rigging to build my life up after saving enough money to buy my first car i joined LSC as a mechanic my hard work paid off as i climbed the ranks earning the title of employee of the week multiple times eventually becoming a senior mechanic and a trainer as well as assisting with background checks sadly a day testing my Paragon R led to my imprisonment spiraling my life into crime after leaving the Goblins i left the city worked on myself earned a master’s degree in engineering in Munich Germany i returned to Los Santos started as a farmer and joined Bayview Auto Center now as a mechanical engineer I’m looking for new opportunities to rebuild my life.

2.2 Why do you want to join the San Andreas Department of Corrections, and why should we hire you over other applicants? (minimum 75 words)
I would love to join the SADOC because i want to commit on helping with safety and order my experience as an engineer gave me a rock solid work ethic and the ability to handle high pressure situations which are valuable to this role i am focused on being a practical straightforward approach to the job my old mistakes showed me the importance of second chances which motivate me to help others and guide them as much as i can.

2.3 What have you learned and changed about yourself since being charged with a felony/misdemeanor (Minimum 50 words)?
after I was charged with my felonies i have learned the tough impact of my actions on both myself and others making me realize the importance of being responsible of your own actions after consistent dedication and hard work my mindset was improved making me a better influence in my community with a positive influence to people around me my experiences have taught me the value of discipline and genuinely good work which i aim to keep living on such standard.

3. Past Experiences & History

3.1 Prior to your charges did you ever work for a government agency or any other Job before? If so, which ones and what was your position?
Los Santos Customs - Senior Mechanic

3.2 Were you ever in a criminal organization? If so, what was your involvement in it?
The Goblins - I was a scout

4. Declaration

I, Peter Hannigan the undersigned, hereby declare: That the information contained within this application form, the curriculum vitae, and in the enclosed documents to my knowledge is true, and I undertake to provide documentary evidence if required. I furthermore declare that all copies enclosed are true to the original documents. I declare that my answers are my own original answers and are not AI generated answers. I declare that I am aware that any lack of veracity of the information or the distortion of the documents will entail the invalidity of the merits affected and that I may be liable for legal responsibility.

I declare that the foregoing is true and correct.
Peter Hannigan
Signing date 13/Aug/2024

(( 5. OOC Section ))

5.1 Forum name: N00BST3R
5.2 Discord Username: omarhoussami
5.3 IRL age: 23
5.4 Geographical Location/Timezone: GMT+3

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5.5 Have you had any admin punishments on any character? If so, explain:
None

5.6 Are you currently banned from any faction in the Eclipse Community?
[] Yes
[X] No

5.7 Have you ever been or are you currently in another official faction? If so, name the faction(s) and your rank
Bayview Auto Center - Junior Mechanic

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5.8 Do you have a working microphone and are you able to use Teamspeak?
[X] Yes
[] No

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5.9 Please provide an unedited picture of your character list and admin logs:

[Lucy Fox]

S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Received

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• Dear Peter,
  
  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. We have RECEIVED and acknowledged your application. This will now be pending review and deliberation by a member of the Human Resources Division. We will be reviewing and examining your previous employment and the details enclosed within the application.
  
  While certain circumstances may preclude a fixed timeframe, you should expect a response to your application within 24 hours.

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  Lucy Fox
  Assistant Head, Human Resources
  San Andreas Department of Corrections

[Lucy Fox]

S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Pending

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• Dear Peter,
  
  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. I have read through your application and it is now PENDING. Please correct the following error(s):
  • ((Your application has been flagged for AI.))
  • You mention in 2.1 that you have worked and climbed within LSC, but then in 3.1 you say you haven't worked any government jobs before your charges. Which is the truth?
  Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).
  Please reply to this topic below to notify us that the errors above have been corrected.

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  Lucy Fox
  Assistant Head, Human Resources
  San Andreas Department of Corrections

[Peter Hannigan]

Hello,

((Regarding the AI flag, I paraphrased every sentence by myself and checked the application on zeroGPT website https://www.zerogpt.com/ and confirmed that all sections are clear. Is it possible please to provide the tool that you use for AI flagging, so I could rephrase my sections as per its standards.))

Kindest Regards

[Lucy Fox]

((Of course, it got flagged on this site.))

[Peter Hannigan]

Hello,

Please note that the changes have been amended as per your request.

Kindest Regards

[Lucy Fox]

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S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Pending

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• Dear Peter,
  
  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. I have read through your application and it is now PENDING. Please correct the following error(s):
  • Your application still gets triggered by AI detectors, this time this one.
  Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).
  Please reply to this topic below to notify us that the errors above have been corrected.

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  Lucy Fox
  Assistant Head, Human Resources
  San Andreas Department of Corrections

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[Peter Hannigan]

Hello,

Please note that I have once again amended the requested changes.

Kind Regards,

[Lucy Fox]

S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Denied

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• Dear Peter,
  
  Upon reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we regret to inform you that we have no choice but to deny your application to join the SADOC. Your application has therefore been archived. Due to the following reasons, we were unable to accept you today:
  • Breach of declaration.
  • ((You kept the same text, and just made some grammatical errors on purpose. Please write it with your own words next time.))
  In relation to any queries, questions, or concerns, please email one of our officers with the Human Resources division using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )). You can reapply in one week's time provided the reasons for the denial are able to be rectified.

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  Lucy Fox
  Assistant head, Human Resources
  San Andreas Department of Corrections