[DENIED] SADOC Application - Axel Diaz

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[DENIED] SADOC Application - Axel Diaz

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1. Personal Information
    1.1 Title (Mr/Miss/Mrs): Mr
    1.2 First Name: Axel
    1.3 Last Name: Diaz
      1.4 Date of Birth: 10/10/1990
      1.5 Place of Birth: United states
        1.6 Contact Number: 4002037
        1.7 Residential Address: Homeless
          1.8 Height: 187 cm
          1.9 Weight: 88 kg
            1.10 Proof of identification and license ((/license))
            Attached Digital Copy
              2. Career Path
                  2.1 Do you want to apply for the Correctional Officer or Correctional Custodian Officer position?
                  [x] CO
                  [] CCO
                  Mark which above with a tick mark (đź—µ)
                  3. Traits & Motivations
                      3.1 Please provide a short biography about yourself (minimum 100 words):
                      Axel diaz , 32 years old, born in San andreas -los santos , my mother died when I was 9 years old , and I have no brothers or sisters ,, so i lived alone with my father who was a soldier for the U.S army . Since a very young age , he taught me the importance of the respect and love we aught to give to our country . When I was 10 , on holidays , I started waking up very early and going with my father for his training , I just sat back and watched for the first couple of weeks , probably a month or two , i really liked the environment there even though it seemed like a very hard and exhausting job but what stood out to me the most are the country love and feelings you can even smell standing there , so , very soon after , I started training , you’d assume that the commander went easy on me as I was at least 10 years younger than the average soldier out there , but he really did not , he went just as hard if not harder after seing my energy and my will to train and work ,he explicitly told my father that I was made for this job , and things like that can only encourage me and strengthen my self esteem and confidence, So i kept on training and training until I got to an age in which I was allowed to join the army . Right at that time , I started looking back to my career and to me as a human and to my goals , and asked myself : Is that what i want to do for the rest of my life ? Being a soldier ? Just because I have the physical and psychological traits needed ?
                      I thought about it for quite a long time and got away with the conclusion that being a soldier is not in fact the job I want, but instead, my love and passion for this country and my physical and psychological strength would be better taken advantage of as a correction officer , because i feel like , I cant kill people in wars , I simply can’t , whatever the circumstances. I suffered myself from a very close family member dying who is my mother and I cant cause the same harm for any other human being , But what I would do is punish people for their mistakes and hopefully help them correct those mistakes and reform to become better human beings .
                        3.2 How much time and energy do you plan on dedicating towards the department in the event you are hired?
                        I will try to do my best with 10 min hours per week
                          3.3 Why do you want to join the San Andreas Department of Corrections, and why should we hire you over other applicants? (minimum 75 words)
                          I want to join the DOC because I believe in the importance of maintaining a safe and orderly society .I have a strong sense of responsibility and a desire to make a positive impact by helping individuals who have made mistakes. I should be hired because I am dedicated, reliable , and have a good understanding of the principles of law and order. I am also a good listener and I can work under pressure.
                            3.4 How do you handle pressure or stressful situations?
                            I handle pressure or stressful situations by staying calm and taking deep breaths.
                                3.5 What qualifications or traits do you possess that may be an asset to us (Minimum 50 words)?
                                I have good communication skills, which allows me to effectively convey information and collaborate with others . I am also a quick learner and adapt well to new environments and procedures.I am highly organized and detail-oriented, ensuring that tasks are completed accurately and efficiently. I am a team player and work well in collaborative settings, contributing to a positive and productive work environment.
                                  4. Past Experiences
                                    4.1 Do you have any previous military or law enforcement history? If so, elaborate:
                                    I was in the military academy.
                                      4.2 Have you ever worked for a government agency? If so, which ones and what was your position?
                                      no.
                                        4.3 Do you have any previous experience working as part of a team?
                                        Yes.
                                          4.4 Have you ever been convicted of a crime? If so, explain:
                                          no.
                                            5. Past Employment
                                            At least 2 past employment is required
                                              Name of employer: united states military academy
                                              Period of employment: 01/08/2021 - 31/05/2023
                                              Position: cadet
                                              Duties: participated in military training, attended academic courses and engaged in physical activities.
                                              Reason for leaving: completed the two year program
                                                Name of employer: alpha security services
                                                Period of employment: 15/06/2020 - 01/01/2021
                                                Position: security Officer
                                                Duties: monitored security systems , controlled access to premises and responded to incidents.
                                                Reason for leaving: transitioned to pursue higher education and gain additional qualifications in the field of law enforcement.
                                                  6. Declaration
                                                    I, Axel Diaz the undersigned, hereby declare: That the information contained within this application form, the curriculum vitae, and in the enclosed documents to my knowledge is true, and I undertake to provide documentary evidence if required. I furthermore declare that all copies enclosed are true to the original documents. I declare that my answers are my own original answers and are not AI generated answers. I declare that I am aware that any lack of veracity of the information or the distortion of the documents will entail the invalidity of the merits affected and that I may be liable for legal responsibility.
                                                      I declare that the foregoing is true and correct.
                                                      Axel Diaz
                                                      Signing date 07/08/2023
                                                        (( 7. OOC Section ))
                                                          7.1 Forum name: nabzzz
                                                          7.2 Discord Username: nabzewi
                                                          7.3 IRL age: 21
                                                          7.4 Geographical Location/Timezone: Tunisia, UTC+1

                                                              7.5 Have you had any admin punishments on any character? If so, explain:
                                                              no.
                                                                7.6 Are you currently banned from any faction in the Eclipse Community?
                                                                [] Yes
                                                                [x] No
                                                                  7.7 Have you ever been or are you currently in another official faction? If so, name the faction(s) and your rank
                                                                  DCC, Trainee

                                                                      7.8 Do you have any IRL experience that might be relevant? If so, please explain.
                                                                      no.
                                                                        7.9 Do you have a working microphone and are you able to use Teamspeak?
                                                                        [x] Yes
                                                                        [] No

                                                                            7.10 Please provide a picture of your /stats:
                                                                            https://imgur.com/a/HbroifL
                                                                              7.11 Please provide an unedited picture of your character list and admin logs:
                                                                              https://imgur.com/a/PIiZLxv
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                                                                                Re: [RECEIVED] SADOC Application - Axel Diaz

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                                                                                S.A.D.O.C.
                                                                                Human Resources Division


                                                                                Application Received


                                                                                • Dear Mr. Diaz,

                                                                                  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. We have RECEIVED and acknowledged your application. This will now be pending review and deliberation by a member of the Human Resources Division. We will be reviewing and examining your previous employment and the details enclosed within the application.

                                                                                  While certain circumstances may preclude a fixed timeframe, you should expect a response to your application within 24 hours.

                                                                                • Kind regards,

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                                                                                  Rose Mikasa
                                                                                  Correctional Officer II, Human Resources Administrator
                                                                                  San Andreas Department of Corrections

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                                                                                Re: [ON HOLD] SADOC Application - Axel Diaz

                                                                                Post by Rose Mikasa »

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                                                                                S.A.D.O.C.
                                                                                Human Resources Division


                                                                                Application Pending


                                                                                • Dear Mr. Diaz,

                                                                                  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. I have read through your application and it is now PENDING. Please correct the following error(s):
                                                                                  • Question 3.1 has multiple grammar errors across the answer, please amend this.
                                                                                  • Question 4.1 & Past Employment | In question 4.1 you state "I was in the military academy for about 4 years.", yet in Past Employment it shows you only being in the military academy for 1 year 9 months and 30 days. Could you please explain this discrepancy?
                                                                                  • ((Your characters age (21 Years Old) makes your backstory highly unrealistic. Please either make your character older so your backstory makes more sense, or change question 3.1 to have a more realistic backstory for your characters age. Along with that please make sure the rest of the application matches your characters backstory.))
                                                                                  Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).
                                                                                  Please reply to this topic below to notify us that the errors above have been corrected.

                                                                                • Kind regards,

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                                                                                  Rose Mikasa
                                                                                  Correctional Officer II, Human Resources Administrator
                                                                                  San Andreas Department of Corrections

                                                                                  [email protected]
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                                                                                Public Relations | Coordinator
                                                                                Human Resources | HR Command
                                                                                Correctional Field Training | Chief Instructor
                                                                                Groundskeeping | Experienced Groundskeeper
                                                                                Correctional Emergency Response Team | Operator [ECHO-3]
                                                                                Crisis Negotiation Unit | Negotiator-In-Training
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                                                                                Re: [ON HOLD] SADOC Application - Axel Diaz

                                                                                Post by nabzz »

                                                                                I am writing to inform you that the errors mentioned in my previous message have been corrected.
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                                                                                Re: [DENIED] SADOC Application - Axel Diaz

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                                                                                S.A.D.O.C.
                                                                                Human Resources Division


                                                                                Application Denied


                                                                                • Dear Mr. Diaz,

                                                                                  Upon reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we regret to inform you that we have no choice but to deny your application to join the SADOC. Your application has therefore been archived. Due to the following reasons, we were unable to accept you today:
                                                                                    • Lack of Care/Effort throughout application | Question 3.1 Looks rushed and has many grammar errors. It appears that you just threw it together instead of taking your time and giving a high quality answer.
                                                                                      In relation to any queries, questions, or concerns, please email one of our officers with the Human Resources division using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )). You can reapply in one week's time provided the reasons for the denial are able to be rectified.

                                                                                    • Kind regards,

                                                                                      Wyatt Miller
                                                                                      CO2, Human Resources
                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections

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                                                                                      Rose Mikasa
                                                                                      Correctional Officer III, Human Resources Administrator
                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections

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