[DENIED] Oliver Hill

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Oliver Hill
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[DENIED] Oliver Hill

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Personal Information
    Title (Mr/Miss/Mrs): MR
    First Name: Oliver
    Last Name: Hill
      Date of Birth: 02/11/1998
      Place of Birth: Texas
        Contact Number: 2207730
        Residential Address: N/A
          Height: 188 cm
          Weight: 99 kg
            Traits & Motivations
              Please provide a short biography about yourself (minimum 100 words):
              I am a 24-year-old male from Texas, I have come to Los Santos to pursue my dream and become a part of any legal group I can. In Texas, I was a cashier and loved my job, I left for a chance to pursue my dreams. My dad was a former Sherriff and served 25 years becoming a sergeant. But after an evening on patrol, he responded to a robbery and he didn't come home, my father passed away from multiple gunshot wounds to the chest and lost too much blood, and died before they could operate on him. I get up every day and want to try to become something of the law to make my father proud and hope I could make him proud in any way. I am not anywhere near perfect but I always try, I love to be told I could improve on anything I do. I graduated straight As and tried and worked so hard to be the best. I have a younger brother and a sister but lost connection with them as they aren't great people, I truly believe I am a good pick for this program of my experience and so much more traits. I do not quit no matter how hard it is but can conquer anything I put my mind on. I love helping people ever since I was a kid I helped my mom and dad every day and I mowed my neighbor's lawns and did their dishes for nothing. I helped my school with dances and football games being the best kid I could to help and stand out. I am setting my goal towards the Department of Corrections and will not give up until that dream is true, I hope I can leave an impact on the city.
                How much time and energy do you plan on dedicating to the department in the event you are hired?
                I plan to dedicate as much time as possible to my DOC career. It will be a good amount of time and energy but I also have a cousin overseas to take care of which is rather time-consuming. Nevertheless, I am willing to spend all my energy and a good amount of time on my career and climb up the ranks.
                  Why do you want to join the San Andreas Department of Corrections, and why should we hire you over other applicants? (minimum 125 words)
                  After flyingng to Los Santos with my brother and sister, we’ve been dreaming of a brighter future. Back in my hometown of Texas, we’ve never really experienced a wealthy lifestyle. Being raised by a single mom, life was always rough. Me and my brother swore that as soon as we grow up, we would make something out of ourselves, essentially working for that life we’ve been dreaming of ever since we were kids. This dream wasn’t only motivated by money and perhaps fame, but also to make our dad proud. He had been working all his life just to try and make life easier for us, but as we grew more mature, we realized that he has been neglecting his own health and life to make sure ours would be better. This job opportunity could turn things around. Instead of him providing for us, we should be the ones taking care of us and our mother now. Being surrounded by crime and violence all our life, we swore that the way we’d make it to the to would be by enforcing the law and justice, as our dad always made sure that we didn’t go the wrong path. In my previous jobs in Los Santos, I was considered very hard-working by my colleagues. I’d wake up early in the mornings, do extra shifts, and would often cover the shifts of my fellow colleagues. I’d also say that one of my biggest pros is my composure. In difficult situations, I try to stay as calm as possible to make sure I get to the best possible outcome. I would also consider myself an admirer of justice, doing everything in my own power to make sure everybody is treated equally, and civilians and innocent people don’t suffer for no reason. I never want to be able to help these people and not be the bad guy but help them change their wrongdoings.
                    How do you handle pressure or stressful situations?
                    I handle them with sheer confidence and composure. I try to not get distracted by the pressure or the stress and look for the best possible outcome of the situation.
                        What qualifications or traits do you possess that may be an asset to us (Minimum 75 words)?
                        I think one of my favorite traits is my composure, I don’t like to try and finish everything as fast as possible, and I don’t like to scream around like a maniac to get my point across. My dedication would also be on the list of my best traits, as I’d do everything to make sure the law is enforced, and justice is preserved. Again, as I said before I would also consider myself hardworking, I would give my time to the people of this city, and I will swear to do so if I get this job. I’m also a person that loves teamwork so working with fellow colleagues is something I look forward to and I’d try and do my best to make sure their safety is guaranteed in every situation.
                          Past Experiences
                            Do you have any previous military or law enforcement history? If so, elaborate:
                            Never.
                              Have you ever worked for a government agency? If so, which ones and what was your position?
                              Never.
                                Do you have any previous experience working as part of a team?
                                I did work for BurgerShot but not a team effort.
                                  Have you ever been convicted of a crime? If so, explain:
                                  Only a misdemeanor for not paying a ticket off when I left the city for a bit.
                                    Past Employment
                                    At least 2 past employment is required
                                      Name of employer: BurgerShot
                                      Period of employment: 05/3/2022 - 23/5/2022
                                      Position: Cashier
                                      Duties: Would take food orders and give the customer their food.
                                      Reason for leaving: Felt like I was ready and financially ready to pursue a legal job.
                                        Name of employer: N/A
                                        Period of employment: DD/MM/YYYY - DD/MM/YYYY
                                        Position: N/A
                                        Duties: N/A
                                        Reason for leaving: N/A
                                          Licences & Permits
                                            Do you possess a valid driver’s license?
                                            [X ] Yes
                                            [ ] No
                                              Do you possess a valid firearms license?
                                              [X ] Yes
                                              [ ] Pending
                                              [ ] No
                                                Are you BLS certified?
                                                [ ] Yes
                                                [X ] No
                                                  Are you capable of understanding written information clearly and acting in accordance with it?
                                                  [X ] Yes
                                                  [ ] No
                                                    Declaration
                                                      I, Oliver Hill the undersigned, hereby declare: That the information contained within this application form, the curriculum vitae, and in the enclosed documents to my knowledge is true, and I undertake to provide documentary evidence if required. I furthermore declare that all copies enclosed are true to the original documents. I declare that I am aware that any lack of veracity of the information or the distortion of the documents will entail the invalidity of the merits affected and that I may be liable for legal responsibility.
                                                        I declare that the foregoing is true and correct.
                                                        Oliver Hill
                                                        Signing date 30/05/2022
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                                                            Forum name: Ryze033
                                                            Discord ID: LiamB#1190
                                                            IRL age: 16
                                                            Timezone:CST
                                                            Geographical location: Texas
                                                            List of characters’ names: Jace Frost/Thomas Armani/ Oliver Hill
                                                                Have you had any admin punishments on any character? If so, explain:
                                                                Yes, I got banned for account sharing but in the end, was a misunderstanding and got solved.
                                                                  Are you currently banned from any faction in the Eclipse Community?
                                                                  Nope.
                                                                    Have you ever been or are you currently in another official faction? If so, name the faction(s) and your rank
                                                                    D.C.C/ Downtown Cab Company- Trainee.
                                                                        Can you speak, understand and write English fluently?
                                                                        Yes.
                                                                          Do you have any IRL experience that might be relevant? If so, please explain.
                                                                          Not any IRL experince but mabye one day.
                                                                            Do you have Team Speak 3 and Discord installed?
                                                                            Yes.
                                                                              Are you capable of using a microphone to speak?
                                                                              Yes.
                                                                                  Please explain the use of /me and provide an example:
                                                                                  /me is used for actions like /me inspects the inmate for injuries.
                                                                                    Please explain the use of /do and provide an example of a scenario in which you might use it:
                                                                                    /do is to go more in-depth into the /me so like after you look over an inmate you can do /do what injuries would I see? Then go on from there.
                                                                                        Please provide a picture of your /stats:
                                                                                        https://imgur.com/a/He1iQXa
                                                                                          Please provide a picture of your /license:
                                                                                          https://imgur.com/a/udcZVB9
                                                                                            Please provide an unedited picture of your character list and admin logs:
                                                                                            https://imgur.com/a/AhKEYfI
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                                                                                              Last edited by Oliver Hill on 31 May 2022, 13:22, edited 2 times in total.
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                                                                                              [ON HOLD] Oliver Hill

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                                                                                                On Hold
                                                                                                  Dear Applicant,

                                                                                                  After reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we have made the executive decision to place your application On Hold due to the following reasons:
                                                                                                    • Traits & Motivations - Your answers have many syntax errors. Please ratify this.
                                                                                                      Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).


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                                                                                                      Guilherme Tavares
                                                                                                      Senior Correctional Officer, Human Resources Administrator
                                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections

                                                                                                      [email protected]

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                                                                                                      Sean Payne
                                                                                                      Captain, Assistant Head Of Human Resources
                                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections

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                                                                                                      Kourtney Lafleur
                                                                                                      Warden
                                                                                                      San Andreas Department of Corrections

                                                                                                        Retired Police Detective I Guilherme Tavares
                                                                                                        Former Robbery-Homicide Detective, Major Crimes Division
                                                                                                        Former Commanding Officer, Firearms and Licensing Division
                                                                                                        Los Santos Police Department — "To Protect and to Serve"
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                                                                                                        San Andreas Department of Corrections — "Public Safety, Public Service"
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                                                                                                        Oliver Hill
                                                                                                        Posts: 41
                                                                                                        Joined: 27 Jun 2021, 03:14
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                                                                                                        Re: [ON HOLD] Oliver Hill

                                                                                                        Post by Oliver Hill »

                                                                                                        Hello I fully fixed the syntax I see what I did wrong and amended them to my best ability I hope you can take time to look at it thank you.
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                                                                                                        Guilherme Tavares
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                                                                                                        [DENIED] Oliver Hill

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                                                                                                          Failed Application
                                                                                                            Dear Applicant,
                                                                                                              Upon reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we regret to inform you that we have no choice but to deny your application to join the SADOC. Your application has therefore been archived. Due to the following reasons we were unable to accept you today:
                                                                                                                • You did not ratify the issues that you claim to have ratified. Please, for your next application, make an effort to be meticulous in having a syntax error-free sentence and form cohesive sentences.
                                                                                                                  In relation to any queries, questions or concerns, please email one of our officers with the Human Resources division using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )). You can reapply in one weeks time provided the reasons for denial are able to be rectified.

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                                                                                                                  Guilherme Tavares
                                                                                                                  Senior Correctional Officer, Human Resources Administrator
                                                                                                                  San Andreas Department of Corrections

                                                                                                                  [email protected]

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                                                                                                                  Sean Payne
                                                                                                                  Captain, Assistant Head Of Human Resources
                                                                                                                  San Andreas Department of Corrections

                                                                                                                  [email protected]

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                                                                                                                  Kourtney Lafleur
                                                                                                                  Warden
                                                                                                                  San Andreas Department of Corrections

                                                                                                                    Retired Police Detective I Guilherme Tavares
                                                                                                                    Former Robbery-Homicide Detective, Major Crimes Division
                                                                                                                    Former Commanding Officer, Firearms and Licensing Division
                                                                                                                    Los Santos Police Department — "To Protect and to Serve"
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                                                                                                                    Senior Correctional Officer Guilherme Tavares
                                                                                                                    Correctional Investigations Division
                                                                                                                    Correctional Field Training Division
                                                                                                                    San Andreas Department of Corrections — "Public Safety, Public Service"
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