[DENIED] SADOC Application Bob Rendall

[thekille897]

Personal Information

Title (Mr/Miss/Mrs): Mr
First Name: Bob
Last Name: Rendall

Date of Birth: 07/12/1995
Place of Birth: white Rock BC Canada

Contact Number: 2086762
Residential Address: i dont have a place

Height: 189cm
Weight: 65kg

Proof of identification and license ((/license))
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Questions

Do you have any prior criminal history? If so please explain your charges and what you have learned from them.
i have no criminal history

Do you want to apply for the Correctional Custodian Officer or Correctional Officer position?
[] CCO
[X] CO

Traits & Motivations

Please provide a short biography about yourself (minimum 100 words):
my name is Bob Rendall I'm new to the city I like to work on cars and races cars too I have a brother in the city and we both have a mom back in Canada I came here for work and was hoping to get into doc I'm a really funny guys I get along with a lot of people I'm easy to talk to and get to know I also like to take out my boat and go fishing and spending time with my 4 kids ages 4/6/10/12 years old I have 3 boys and one girl

How much time and energy do you plan on dedicating towards the department in the event you are hired?
5 to 15 hours a week

Why do you want to join the San Andreas Department of Corrections, and why should we hire you over other applicants? (minimum 75 words)
I want to join doc to meet other people that work there and to help the people in there to get them on a better path I like to work around other people I'm a nice guy and easy to work with and I can calm down people easy and I'm a really funny guy and I like to tell jokes and I like to help out around to make sure everything is clean that's the kind of guy I am

How do you handle pressure or stressful situations?
i try to get everyone to be clam and talk and find out what's wrong with them

What qualifications or traits do you possess that may be an asset to us (Minimum 50 words)?
I use to be a gym owner back in 2018 but it didn't work out and had to close it down but I did work with others and help them workout and make a workout plan I worked with other trainer's to make work out plans for the day I like being fit

Past Experiences

Do you have any previous military or law enforcement history? If so, elaborate:
no

Have you ever worked for a government agency? If so, which ones and what was your position?
no

Do you have any previous experience working as part of a team?
no

Have you ever been convicted of a crime? If so, explain:
no

Past Employment

At least 2 past employment is required

Name of employer: post office
Period of employment: 05/06/2021 - 05/06/2022
Position: Driver
Duties: bring post to houses
Reason for leaving: laid off

Name of employer: coca cola
Period of employment: 06/23/2022 - 03/15/2023
Position: Driver
Duties: bring pop to stores
Reason for leaving: laid off

Declaration

I, Bob Rendall the undersigned, hereby declare: That the information contained within this application form, the curriculum vitae, and in the enclosed documents to my knowledge is true, and I undertake to provide documentary evidence if required. I furthermore declare that all copies enclosed are true to the original documents. I declare that my answers are my own original answers and are not AI generated answers. I declare that I am aware that any lack of veracity of the information or the distortion of the documents will entail the invalidity of the merits affected and that I may be liable for legal responsibility.

I declare that the foregoing is true and correct.
Bob Rendall
Signing date 19/03/2023

(( OOC Section ))

Forum name: David Rendall
Discord Username: David.Games#0387
IRL age: 33
Geographical Location/Timezone: Canada

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Have you had any admin punishments on any character? If so, explain:
yes (warning) Spoken to about Deathmatching | Attacking another player without proper escalation or In Character motive | (SirQubed-fr, Razza-fr, Joveltine-fr) (warning)NonRP #1 (FearRP) | Failing to comply with demands while under gunpoint.(warning)Spoken to about Ruleplaying | Fleeing to an NCZ whilst under active threat.(warning)Spoken to about Deathmatching | Attacking another player without proper escalation or In Character motive | (SirQubed-fr, Razza-fr, Joveltine-fr)(warning)Spoken to about Mixing | Referring to a player's ID via VOIP | (SirQubed-fr, Razza-fr, Joveltine-fr)

Are you currently banned from any faction in the Eclipse Community?
[] Yes
[X] No

Have you ever been or are you currently in another official faction? If so, name the faction(s) and your rank
no

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Do you have any IRL experience that might be relevant? If so, please explain.
no

Do you have a working microphone and are you able to use Teamspeak?
[X] Yes
[] No

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Please provide a picture of your /stats:
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Please provide an unedited picture of your character list and admin logs:
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[thekille897]

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[Jemma Smith]

S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Received

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• Dear Bob,
  
  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. We have RECEIVED and acknowledged your application. This will now be pending review and deliberation by a member of the Human Resources Division. We will be reviewing and examining your previous employment and the details enclosed within the application.
  
  While certain circumstances may preclude a fixed timeframe, you should expect a response to your application within 24 hours.

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  
  Jemma Smith
  Correctional Officer III, Human Resources Administrator, Reformation Trainee
  San Andreas Department of Corrections
  [email protected]

[Jemma Smith]

S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Pending

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• Dear Bob,
  
  Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. I have read through your application and it is now PENDING. Please correct the following error(s):
  • Please review your answers within the "biography" and "why you want to join the SADOC" sections as these both have a minimum word requirement that you have failed to meet. In your biography, tell us a bit more about who you are, what you do for fun, what brought you to San Andreas, and where you came from... That kind of thing. For the other section, tell us about what you can bring to the role and what drove you to submit this application!
  • You do not have a trucker's licence - please arrange to get this ASAP.
  • Please also check your spelling and grammar throughout. I cannot see any commas or full stops in your application and you've made a few spelling mistakes like "clam" instead of "calm".
  • You mentioned you were a gym owner but have not listed this in your previous employment history, can you tell us a bit more about this role? I'm sure there are many skills you have from this job that would be transferable to SADOC. You also mentioned you do not have any previous experience working as a team. Did you not have any employees or work within a team in any sports aspect when you owned the gym?
  • ((your discord name isnt complete is there a #number so we can add you to the SADOC discord?))
  Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  
  Jemma Smith
  Correctional Officer III, Human Resources Administrator, Reformation Trainee
  San Andreas Department of Corrections
  [email protected]

[thekille897]

hello there i updated it and fix everything

[thekille897]

i made the update that u ask me for

[thekille897]

all done

[Jemma Smith]

S.A.D.O.C. Human Resources Division Application Denied

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• Dear RECIPIENT,
  
  Upon reviewing the application submitted to us by yourself, we regret to inform you that we have no choice but to deny your application to join the SADOC. Your application has therefore been archived. Due to the following reasons, we were unable to accept you today:
  • There seems to be a lack of effort throughout your application (even after your amendments) which makes me question how motivated you are to start a career at SADOC.
  • The spelling and grammar throughout the application are still very bad which made the application difficult to read. Here at SADOC, an important part of the role is paperwork, for which you'd need to be proficient at writing.
  • You have still mentioned that you have no previous experience working as a team within your application however made additional reference to your past gym business after I prompted you to expand on this "I did work with others and help them workout and make a workout plan I worked with other trainer's to make work out plans for the day".
  In relation to any queries, questions, or concerns, please email one of our officers with the Human Resources division using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )). You can reapply in one week's time provided the reasons for the denial are able to be rectified.

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• Kind regards,
  
  
  
  Jemma Smith
  Correctional Officer III, Human Resources Administrator, Reformation Trainee
  San Andreas Department of Corrections
  [email protected]