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[DENIED] SADOC CCO Application Hama Jackson
Posted: 12 May 2024, 09:51
by Hama Jackson
1. Personal Information
1.1 Title (Mr/Miss/Mrs): Mr
1.2 First Name: Hama
1.3 Last Name: Jackson
1.4 Date of Birth: 20/JULY/2000
1.5 Place of Birth: America, New York.
1.6 Contact Number: 489-4732
1.7 Residential Address: N/A
1.8 Proof of identification and license https://imgur.com/a/TOiCYam
2. Traits & Motivations
2.1 Please provide a short biography about yourself (minimum 100 words):
Hello, I am 21 years old and was born in America, New York. I was raised by my dad and mom, she advised me a lot to become a prison guard, so I obeyed her and now I want to join SADOC. I'm a guy that don't have a bad record, and I hope I'll never get a bad record. I have never used a weapon. My strengths are teamwork, communication, patience, and honesty. I have a bike called Manchez, which is my favorite bike, and I love it so much. I have a lot of goals in this city, one of them is to become rich and I want to get a lot of money, and I don't want to be corrupt.
2.2 Why do you want to join the San Andreas Department of Corrections, and why do you want to become a CCO? (minimum 50 words)
I want to join San Andreas Department of Corrections because I think this is a great Government job to join and my mom advised me a lot to join this job, I have a lot of skills that might benefit this job by any way, I'm a great person, I never got arrested or something like that and I might be fit for this job. I also have goals in this job and one of them is to become CO after I learned a lot of things.
3. Past Experiences
I don't have a Past Experiences, I'm looking forward to learn.
3.1 Have you ever worked for a government agency or any other Job? If so, which ones and what was your position?
No.
3.2 Have you ever been convicted of a crime? If so, explain:
No, never.
4. Declaration
I, HAMA JACKSON the undersigned, hereby declare: That the information contained within this application form, the curriculum vitae, and in the enclosed documents to my knowledge is true, and I undertake to provide documentary evidence if required. I furthermore declare that all copies enclosed are true to the original documents. I declare that my answers are my own original answers and are not AI generated answers. I declare that I am aware that any lack of veracity of the information or the distortion of the documents will entail the invalidity of the merits affected and that I may be liable for legal responsibility.
I declare that the foregoing is true and correct.
HAMA JACKSON
Signing date 5/MAY/2024
(( 5. OOC Section ))
5.1 Forum name: Hama232
5.2 Discord Username: hama_boy21
5.3 IRL age: 16
5.4 Geographical Location/Timezone: GMT+3, Iraq.
5.5 Have you had any admin punishments on any character? If so, explain:
No.
5.6 Are you currently banned from any faction in the Eclipse Community?
[] Yes
[X] No
5.7 Have you ever been or are you currently in another official faction? If so, name the faction(s) and your rank
No.
5.8 Do you have a working microphone and are you able to use Teamspeak?
[] Yes
[X] No
5.9 Please provide a picture of your /stats:
https://imgur.com/a/uWQCJb2
5.10 Please provide an unedited picture of your character list and admin logs:
https://imgur.com/a/dizmO2Y

[RECEIVED] SADOC CCO Application Hama Jackson
Posted: 12 May 2024, 16:38
by Olive Bloom
Re: [ON HOLD] SADOC CCO Application Hama Jackson
Posted: 12 May 2024, 17:34
by Jimmithy Jemima

S.A.D.O.C.
Human Resources Division
Application Pending
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- Dear Mr. Jackson,
Thank you for applying to the San Andreas Department of Corrections. I have read through your application and it is now PENDING. Please correct the following error(s):
- 1.8 - The photocopy of your license does not show the name of the license holder, please ensure that the photocopy shows the full license and not a partial copy.
- 2 - Upon a review of your application, it is apparent that there are many inconsistences within your sentences, in addition to your application being very poorly written. Your application is full of syntax errors in addition with you with failing to write and from cohesive sentences. Please re-write your answers so that your sentences are syntax error-free and are cohesive sentences.
- 2.1 - You state that you are 21 years old, but you state in question 1.4 that your date of birth is in the year 2000, making you 23, turning 24 this year. It is worrying that you are not aware of your current age, please correct this.
- 4.0 - You have dated your declaration as the 5th of May, 2024. Please amend this to the date of submission.
- (( 5.7 - You state that you are not and have not been in any factions, although on your other character's application you stated that you are current a member of the Bayview Auto Center faction, please amend this to reflect your current and past memberships in faction(s) on the server. ))
Due to the concerns outlined above, we are giving you 48 hours from now to revise these issues. Failure to do so may result in the immediate denial of your application. If you require assistance or have any questions, feel free to email one of our officers with the Human Resources division at any time using the government website (( forum PM the HR officer who sent this reply )).
Please reply to this topic below to notify us that the errors above have been corrected.
- Kind regards,

Jimmithy Jemima
Captain of Departmental Operations, Deputy Head of Human Resources
San Andreas Department of Corrections
[email protected]

Re: [DENIED] SADOC CCO Application Hama Jackson
Posted: 13 May 2024, 00:40
by Jimmithy Jemima
Re: [DENIED] SADOC CCO Application Hama Jackson
Posted: 13 May 2024, 00:57
by Jimmithy Jemima
(( Due to further OOC toxic comments, the ban date has been extended to 3 Months. ))